Your post is so poorly written it is hard to take it seriously.

Take for instance the quote above, did you work for them and hence have first-hand knowledge
of the situation, or were you fortunate to have contacted people before having accepted
a position there?

Does that really matter. Splitting hairs it seems to me. We get the gist of it.

I also disagree with your opinion about the writing style. It's written just fine and seems plausible. It's one person's opinion, anyway, just let the guy have his say.