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Re: Sentence Coherence Confusion
In Response To: Sentence Coherence Confusion (Xu Yuliang)
Xiu,
I like how you changed the paragraph to give it more clarity. You are correct that the original way it was written was quite confusing for the reader. However, the way you changed it into separating the opposing view and then the proponent view was well done and added clarity to the passage.
Dr. Yanni Zack
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